06-04-2020, 12:26 PM
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Punchline Prettyboy
Join Date: Jan 2014
Posts: 1,512
Battle Record: 7-0
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Originally Posted by slecht
He can't capture me, I run wild. I am slecht, the assassin of this dumb child.
No need to remain anonymous but I am exposing this fuck, no trump files.
....I didn’t like this . Nothing to sink my teeth into no pun intended . Just was kinda bland
Idiot chump thinks he's fun. All I need is one night...standing by him with the biggest gun
Then point it at him..getting smash till that body ain't seen no more...That's a hit & run.
...that’s not really how a hit and run works . Also u don’t have to feel obligated to rhyme twice in the setup every time . Formulas get boring and voters tune it out
I carry an eagle. Enough bullets to serve and have smash down.
Desert's with me, & I am firing it up quicker than staff at the burning man camp ground.
....ok this was better
At first, his girl won't know when I kill him. She won't be around to check...
Might think it's a murder hoax till I give his miss information...about the death.
..::again better but I mean that relative to ur prior lines . It’s low hanging fruit here in the sense that ur not doing anything new or wild wit a fairly obvious concept ... wit that being said u did execute it fairly well
I am that gutter. His family will investigate it so I will need a fast cover.
if his siblings want to play games too, I will also get rid of Smash's Brothers.
....this is the best line u had it fired on all cylinders
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Originally Posted by SMaSH
This waaayyy past the deadline fam...
U buggin wit no potential, But Im so gonna end u,
You're clearly nothing but a gnat to me n ion care if that termite offend u
.::this is really really played bro . U prolly don’t know but yea . This is bad
Please don't talk to me about cadence, I'll make sure the doubt faded
But you... You the type writers laugh at even on old machines because you outdated
....eh . Great wording bad concept bro . It’s really cliche
I got your girl... Sitting here ready to blow, but her friends talkin shit is the craziest tho
Cuz they sitting here all dishin (audition) like they trying to make it a show
....ok yo. I remember u being better than this unless ur a different person than who I’m thinking of non offense . This is bad bad bad u can’t explain the wordplay or joke bro . That’s like auto loss
And what the fuck is your name bro... Is it something tough, well I looked it up
And basically ima make u jump in between these 2 ropes... I'll double dutch
....no
Fuck you up in a timely source wit an unrivaled force, like what is he point in even surviving for? I'll hospitalize you...while playing Pokemon go... Then break in and beat you till your Ivysaur.
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Nah man second guy really has a lot to work on . Ur really good at wording but the concepts are like a decade old
Sletch got this
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You ain’t a young buck ... yous a dumb fuck//run up and get gun butted.. get all your gums bust
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