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06-16-2013, 02:19 PM
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Steel Cut
Join Date: May 2013
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This was dope. Good rhythm and cadence here, very easy to follow the flow. Lots of standout lines, too. I particularly liked the do up laces scheme to due a pay slip, as well as the ending segment of "eyes purpose" till the end. Good shit man, I'll look out for more from you.
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