Exis. 6-Feet. Lars. Simple.

Concrete · 06-03-2020, 12:12 PM

No shortage of bars here, good thing you managed to keep the momentum going for the most part. First segment flowed good throughout with some nice brag and grimness mix.
Second part felt more like a "listen punk, imma tell you something" and I can like that in the fashion it was written here. After first read the line the stuck out here was probably the 404 one, yet overall the whole piece was smooth sailing pretty much.

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06-03-2020, 12:12 PM	#2
Concrete Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Location: Oslo Posts: 179 Battle Record: 5-0 Rep Power: 2158978	No shortage of bars here, good thing you managed to keep the momentum going for the most part. First segment flowed good throughout with some nice brag and grimness mix. Second part felt more like a "listen punk, imma tell you something" and I can like that in the fashion it was written here. After first read the line the stuck out here was probably the 404 one, yet overall the whole piece was smooth sailing pretty much.