Round 1: slecht Vs. SMaSH - SMaSH Wins

Ajax · 06-02-2020, 12:12 AM

Ugh. That wordplay style. It’s so hard to do right, and when it’s done wrong it’s sooo forced.

This was hard to vote on, I think both heads could use a fair amount of practice. The basics are there, but they need to be honed a lot. Smash ended up having better conceptual ideas, but concepts only work well if they’re executed cleanly (and they really weren’t here). Luckily for Smash, Slecht came with less wit... So, he took this one... but I wasn’t particularly impressed with either verse. Keep writing, fellas.

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06-02-2020, 12:12 AM	#14
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	Ugh. That wordplay style. It’s so hard to do right, and when it’s done wrong it’s sooo forced. This was hard to vote on, I think both heads could use a fair amount of practice. The basics are there, but they need to be honed a lot. Smash ended up having better conceptual ideas, but concepts only work well if they’re executed cleanly (and they really weren’t here). Luckily for Smash, Slecht came with less wit... So, he took this one... but I wasn’t particularly impressed with either verse. Keep writing, fellas.