WEEK 8: Adverse vs Vulgar(sub) ADVERSE WINS

Pharaohs Army · 05-19-2020, 11:05 PM

I feel like Vulgar gave readers a great little snapshot into a (fictional) moment in history; though it reads as non-fiction.

No relation to the picture that I can see

Adverse I must say seems to always face tough opponents at their best. I like his stuff, including this verse, but I just don't think it had the depth and descriptions of Vulgar's verse

He wrote to the picture and I must say packed a few more rhymes in than Vulgar. Both pluses I just don't know if it's enough.

I'm not going to DQ Vulgar for not relating to the picture (Although I advise him to try and do so from now on)

I just think he had the better piece of writing this week

Thanks for the reads.

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05-19-2020, 11:05 PM	#11
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	I feel like Vulgar gave readers a great little snapshot into a (fictional) moment in history; though it reads as non-fiction. No relation to the picture that I can see Adverse I must say seems to always face tough opponents at their best. I like his stuff, including this verse, but I just don't think it had the depth and descriptions of Vulgar's verse He wrote to the picture and I must say packed a few more rhymes in than Vulgar. Both pluses I just don't know if it's enough. I'm not going to DQ Vulgar for not relating to the picture (Although I advise him to try and do so from now on) I just think he had the better piece of writing this week Thanks for the reads.