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05-05-2020, 06:28 AM
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Storyteller
Join Date: May 2020
Posts: 446
Battle Record: 8-4
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How come you post all your OMs in a single thread? The new guy is confused.
Anywho, the last one had a good stand out line: "I am the rainbow of asunder; the yellow lightning in the thunder" But the rest was repetitive. Same handful lines again and again with the odd word flipped. I liked the imagery you were throwing around, but that mechanic made it more like a chant than an OM. |
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