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Clutbuck
So I'm impressed by the way this was executed. And I am a bit biased because I also like to take the literal route sometimes with a pic and get technical. (I can't do it like this, but, you knowwhatimean) Flowed well and good technical aspects of the rhyming. Read Clutbuck's first and knew it would take a great great verse to top it, just because I enjoyed the angle. Couldn't help but read the votes before this and I agree that waste fuel/ space suit is a bit of a stretch. I'll ding you for it but not too heavily Adverse Also flowed well and good rhyming. This sucks cuz against most other verses you'd probably win easily. I hate to say it but it truly comes down to "personal preference". Really enjoyed the end of your first stanza, both technically and content-wise. Quote:
But not enough to take it here, sorry. Just liked Clut's better as a whole and the smartass angle. V Clutbuck |
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