Week One: Larkin vs. Ender - ENDER WINS

Adverse · 04-09-2020, 12:38 PM

Read Ender's verse before Larkin ever posted and thought it was a weird read, not the typical battle verse i was used to seeing, you can tell he's cut from a different cloth definitely. I liked the ass for sure, rust off bars, Larkin had some decent ideas but execution fell flat on quite a few as well, really liked the Moses staff bar, thought you spent way too much time on political content and should have been a little more clever/harsh. I don't know, Ender stuck out more to me so I'd give him the W. Good work.

V/Ender

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04-09-2020, 12:38 PM	#8
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Read Ender's verse before Larkin ever posted and thought it was a weird read, not the typical battle verse i was used to seeing, you can tell he's cut from a different cloth definitely. I liked the ass for sure, rust off bars, Larkin had some decent ideas but execution fell flat on quite a few as well, really liked the Moses staff bar, thought you spent way too much time on political content and should have been a little more clever/harsh. I don't know, Ender stuck out more to me so I'd give him the W. Good work. V/Ender