Guns & Cigarettes (Freeverse)

[Geno]

I dig your sound. But your a victim of what uh oh would call textcee-to-audio-syndrome.

Basically your longbar is to much for your actual breath control. Took me a while but i learned finally to write ober a beat and incorporate my breathcontrol. Pauses for air and all that shit into my bars. It really does hurt a textcees style because longbar becomes short bar real quick if thats how you write. Just guessing but i feel like this was written then spit. Right? Maybe im wrong but at points as i was like damn..if only hed took a few syllables out of that set he would have hit the beat better and had more air. Idk fam.

All in all. I like your sound. Very underground and grimey hiphoppish. Pretty cool post for what you did. Thanks man. Im edging ever nearer to a surprise diss for someone special. I really am lol. It just feels like so much work anymore to se set up and write and it so kuch easier to hit my couch and turn the ps4 on. Im such a lazy fuck. -hangs head- :/