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Way too long for my taste but gotta give cred where credit is due, and I can tell you definitely put time and effort into perfecting this piece of art. Was worth it to read it through. Dope drop, I like how you tie in the story here and there to remind the reader that you're telling a story to a girl (another funny condescending detail starting off the piece to make it sting a bit more, lol) Condescending passive aggressiveness throughout with flow and great rhyme patterns and multis made it an entertaining drop, especially enjoyed these:
I didn't need to "champ a league", I'm Tommaso Ciampa in mags he dropped It ain't that odd to see a great white shark eaten by the Megalodon (That's an awful monster) You take to your gene pool like a Stan to water You're his brand new daughter... the moral of the story: I AM your father Solid drop. Verse of the month material right there.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave. www.youtube.com/watch?v=gV8ozGcGJ6o Last edited by Objective; 03-18-2020 at 12:08 AM. |
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