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Old 02-19-2020, 10:03 AM   #3
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Loved this.

Like Exis said the imagery is crazy in this. I really like how everything you do seems to have a double meaning. To me this was about growing up in a big, heartless city. Cement. Cold. Faceless. Thankless. But on the other hand it was a metaphor for depression. How we can't shed the skin we were born with. Nature vs. Nurture, It can be looked at in both ways. I might be looking too deep into your posts but I really feel like I'm not...

You're def on to something here. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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