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02-16-2020, 10:45 AM
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Ukrainian Howlitzers
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Slechtq at it's core I like the concept here...don't recall a stick line like this before. I can't help but feel like the wording is messed on the punch tho, that's just one of the sticks? That's just the stick giving him would've sufficed and been better...cool concept, meh multi setup and execution
Flow left/right button plays were done to death in their day, but yes the flip and direction you took this was pretty cool....lol at the hate fuck his girl idea....tie ins were cool , console play worked in the set up....the lazy barely one syllable multi is just trash tho Cool battle I got flow for a slightly better overall bar and concept
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