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Old 02-11-2020, 01:53 PM   #1
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Yeah, feeling this. Slept on for sure. Maybe it's just me but I assumed this was a metaphor for porn... could be wrong. I probably am.

Regardless, good stuff.
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Yeah, feeling this. Slept on for sure. Maybe it's just me but I assumed this was a metaphor for porn... could be wrong. I probably am.

Regardless, good stuff.
You're spot on. Lust and pornography is something I've struggled with in my life, it's just something I've always confided in, when things got bad that's where i turned for a stroke of familiarity (no pun intended lol) I've written a lot of pieces about it, people try to say it isn't addictive but i beg to differ entirely. Thanks to you and to @Exis for y'all feed, makes it worth writing
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