Week 1: FGR vs Plot - FGR WINS

Saint · 01-17-2020, 02:53 PM

Week 1

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread.

DUE TUESDAY

@FGR
@Plot

*The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.*

FGR · 01-17-2020, 07:41 PM

Yoo

Plot · 01-18-2020, 05:33 AM

yup

Plot · 01-21-2020, 10:54 AM

Crystal Head thinks hes fly in the Skyy...Plot'll drop ya
Fgrs Absolut trash, so bash him to death with a bottle of vodka.

FGR · 01-21-2020, 11:40 AM

Pass my way I'll let the semi spray, make a move n you'll get some
If you even budgets popping off like you started earning extra income

Inno · 01-21-2020, 10:35 PM

Both decent felt the budget flip and overall punch from FGR was smoother so I’m goin with fgr

Sharp · 01-22-2020, 10:21 AM

Thought plot was okay, but basic. Fgrs flip was pretty smooth and clever, but the punch itself was light. Still enough for me tho

V/fgr

Adverse · 01-22-2020, 10:23 AM

FGR hit a little harder for me, liked the wordplay quite a bit. I liked Plot's bar but was just missing that sting i suppose? Oh well nice bout gentlemen

Mvgt/FGR

Aero · 01-22-2020, 10:24 AM

Cool battle. FGRs wording was better though.

FGR

Habitat · 01-22-2020, 11:01 AM

thought absolut vodka had more potential then what i saw here. it seemed like a lazy way to execute it

ive seen budget done before but not this way so it was fresh for me.

decent battle but I got fgr with the better bar here.

v/fgr

Blue Bayou · 01-22-2020, 11:24 AM

I'm torn.....

Plot the absolute/crystel head stuff translated well to the attack bar but the wording just isn't very good ..multi syllables are off, it's not very smooth...just seems rushed

FGR on the other hand wasn't fresh but delivered a much smoother and better written bar

Hmmmmm....FGR edged it but I would've voted for plot for sure with different execution...props to both

the Munster · 01-22-2020, 01:02 PM

I think plots was decent

I really liked the budget concept however I do not think you worded it well like at all. But I still want to vote for it. Plots just wasn’t really too creative

Fgr

Saint · 01-22-2020, 02:35 PM

FGR WINS

01-17-2020, 02:53 PM	#1
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Week 1: FGR vs Plot - FGR WINS Week 1 You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. DUE TUESDAY @FGR @Plot The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar. Last edited by Saint; 01-22-2020 at 02:36 PM.

01-22-2020, 10:24 AM	#9
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Cool battle. FGRs wording was better though. FGR __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

01-22-2020, 11:01 AM	#10
Habitat Make my day Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 742 Battle Record: 8-6 Champed - 1-2 LR Tournament Rep Power: 7519562	thought absolut vodka had more potential then what i saw here. it seemed like a lazy way to execute it ive seen budget done before but not this way so it was fresh for me. decent battle but I got fgr with the better bar here. v/fgr __________________

01-22-2020, 11:24 AM	#11
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	I'm torn..... Plot the absolute/crystel head stuff translated well to the attack bar but the wording just isn't very good ..multi syllables are off, it's not very smooth...just seems rushed FGR on the other hand wasn't fresh but delivered a much smoother and better written bar Hmmmmm....FGR edged it but I would've voted for plot for sure with different execution...props to both __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

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01-17-2020, 07:41 PM	#2
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	Yoo

01-18-2020, 05:33 AM	#3
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	yup

01-21-2020, 10:54 AM	#4
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,374 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309744	Crystal Head thinks hes fly in the Skyy...Plot'll drop ya Fgrs Absolut trash, so bash him to death with a bottle of vodka.

01-21-2020, 11:40 AM	#5
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	Pass my way I'll let the semi spray, make a move n you'll get some If you even budgets popping off like you started earning extra income

01-21-2020, 10:35 PM	#6
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Both decent felt the budget flip and overall punch from FGR was smoother so I’m goin with fgr

01-22-2020, 10:23 AM	#8
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	FGR hit a little harder for me, liked the wordplay quite a bit. I liked Plot's bar but was just missing that sting i suppose? Oh well nice bout gentlemen Mvgt/FGR

01-22-2020, 01:02 PM	#12
the Munster Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 686 Rep Power: 2908899	I think plots was decent I really liked the budget concept however I do not think you worded it well like at all. But I still want to vote for it. Plots just wasn’t really too creative Fgr

01-22-2020, 02:35 PM	#13
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	FGR WINS