I WANT SOMEONE TO BE PROUD OF ME

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I WANT SOMEONE TO BE PROUD OF ME

11-29-2019, 07:04 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by big baby

honestly i feel the sane but this reads pretty much the same as your other stuff?

i think you missed the bit(s) where she didn't press enter thus making it a radically different format.

i personally wouldn't have been proud of this but you don't need my validation (or anyone else's). didn't hate it, either.

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