feel alive

[Scar]

this is really good. read it a few times already. lots of creative idiom flips and wordplays that worked with the concept as a whole. specifically the pop the bottes.. Light in skin and fluid wings and flock of swallow were interesting. pluck me's sub-zero and pluck'em with paint were also cool turn of phrase.

Lonely astronaut who doesn't know what to do with space when he gets it

that was nasty.

Their whole has died. Polarized

awesome.

very awesome read my man.