Blue Bayou vs Joe Boston[OPEN]

Answer · 06-29-2019, 09:01 AM

We can square off or get your mans bring one after another
Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover

dope opener

My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride
Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride

is this supposed to be boo car key? nawwww. the overall wording is well executed, but I just cant down with that wp

Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret
Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet

this is alright but I feel like i've witnessed a few singing bars, especially from live battles. I wish this had a bit more of an original spin to it

Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges
Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy

this is ok. it would've been dope but hiram is pronounced "Hi-rum", not "hear 'em"

Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped
Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip

solid. I can nitpick about the logistics of this, but it's decent

Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature
Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker

A bit straightforward, but overall I thought this was good

You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider
You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider

Solid, but something feels like it's missing

Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild
Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child

solid closer, no real complaints but maybe the wording toward the end could've resonated more

oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect
you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex

eh wording on the actual wp seems a little bit wonky but overall it's a solid opener

sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips
buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David

this is dope, no complaints

if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting
make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving

this comes up a bit shy of being a haymaker in my eyes, but still good

^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude
squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe

eh, the bar itself would be fire if it were fresh but I've seen enough tommy & drum lines. The motley crue aspect of it is a fresh flip so it's cool, but the core of it is a bit played.

we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled
i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled

dope

& ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears..
serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years

fire

stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless
blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended

bar is solid, wp is just barely passable, but something didn't quite land for me

you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin
first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription

eh its ok. you know clip bars aren't fresh. Even if you kept this in your verse, I wish you would've closed with the mojo bar instead

overall this is a dope showing from both sides. I've only read 3 of the battles so far, but I wouldn't be surprised if it's my favorite of the round. Joe's verse was dope, but there were a few really small things I saw in some of his bars that made the difference between being good vs. great. Blue had a couple bars that were worded really well & fresh flips, but they were still based on old concepts at the foundation. That being said, I think he had more haymakers that really landed with me. I'm not really sure what I've got for botb, I liked mahomes, mojo, and the big papi bars equally.

overall v/ blue bayou

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06-29-2019, 09:01 AM	#8
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,702 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	We can square off or get your mans bring one after another Bet their all pussy, you’ll tell me Mahomes ain’t showing his face like it was ripped off a Madden 20 cover dope opener My goons burn through rubbers plowing ur bitch in the ass we strip her for all her pride Time you come home and asked for Bukkake we took turns cumming in her face and took the whip for a joyride is this supposed to be boo car key? nawwww. the overall wording is well executed, but I just cant down with that wp Blade will slide into his jugular easy I’ll laugh as I feel no regret Have bullets from the four signing, you’d think he was surrounded by the barbershop quartet this is alright but I feel like i've witnessed a few singing bars, especially from live battles. I wish this had a bit more of an original spin to it Better yet I’ll dismember his arms n legs, all steel hammer to crush his phalanges Protect his wife if I Hiram Walker to the exit, I’ll have both their brains leaking out darker than blackberry brandy this is ok. it would've been dope but hiram is pronounced "Hi-rum", not "hear 'em" Everyone knows how dangerous Joe can be, don’t approach when the firearms equipped Catch you while you’re sleeping the barrel will be under your nose like a breathe right nasal strip solid. I can nitpick about the logistics of this, but it's decent Talk with loose lips I’ll slap ya, could give a fuck about your stature Crack your Jawbone with so much force the steps you take before you fall could break a calorie tracker A bit straightforward, but overall I thought this was good You’re a known slacker, broke as fuck and not a provider You live such an emotional roller coaster now you’re too overweight to fit in a one person single rider Solid, but something feels like it's missing Have your moms and sister as an appetizer u know later me n wifey getting wild Whenever I’m at your house I deliver the goods, no wonder she tells your kid that he’s the mailman’s child solid closer, no real complaints but maybe the wording toward the end could've resonated more oh yeahhhhhhh the 200 loss loser that has always lacked respect you’re the ‘douchebags embarrassed’ & whose girl refers to him that way after sex eh wording on the actual wp seems a little bit wonky but overall it's a solid opener sawed-off bigger than Ortiz so there’s mad distortion when i bang clips buckshots. when he hears a Big Papi’s not gunna end up as fortunate as David this is dope, no complaints if this guy keeps chirping i’ma hit em til his eyes be squirting make’em swallow the barrel – that’s a bigger Bust in Boston then Kyrie Irving this comes up a bit shy of being a haymaker in my eyes, but still good ^^now those are fresh Boston lines. u’ve lost ya mind thinkin you can drop me dude squad hit yaaa we cock these tools. ‘end ya set’ w/a Tommy & some Drums like we Mötley Crüe eh, the bar itself would be fire if it were fresh but I've seen enough tommy & drum lines. The motley crue aspect of it is a fresh flip so it's cool, but the core of it is a bit played. we’ve squared off a lot a times in the past & i always dropped lines that dazzled i liked our second best...but regardless you’ve been that every time we’ve battled dope & ya you fuck your girl but she’s always left sad and in tears.. serious, if she’s askin for mojo it’s cuz she hasn’t ‘felt the magic’ in years fire stud shooter. i pump rugers point blank & when they uncork ya headless blood all over my mink - Deferral be Read like a judge sayin court’s suspended bar is solid, wp is just barely passable, but something didn't quite land for me you’re gettin’ murdered pussy it’s time you learned i was born for clippin first shot don’t kill you, i’ll give you the whole clip like a paid for porn subscription eh its ok. you know clip bars aren't fresh. Even if you kept this in your verse, I wish you would've closed with the mojo bar instead overall this is a dope showing from both sides. I've only read 3 of the battles so far, but I wouldn't be surprised if it's my favorite of the round. Joe's verse was dope, but there were a few really small things I saw in some of his bars that made the difference between being good vs. great. Blue had a couple bars that were worded really well & fresh flips, but they were still based on old concepts at the foundation. That being said, I think he had more haymakers that really landed with me. I'm not really sure what I've got for botb, I liked mahomes, mojo, and the big papi bars equally. overall v/ blue bayou