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04-07-2019, 10:16 AM
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a macule is a skin blemish. u can have one on ur eye its more a general term so the tie ins and concept are a little eh for me. obv the wordplay works, and the bar is worded well, but i think Res went with the wrong angle with this one
plot had a solid bar. not a haymaker but connected well fs. this was an upset imo, good shit mang. vote Plot |
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