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Old 04-05-2019, 03:26 AM   #3
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whack buster this is lackluster
my feed rhymes

i'm annoyed. you've got apostrophes where they shouldn't be and then other places they're missing.

capture the flash of my minds travel
mind's*

I'm Houdini with pen's
pens*

taint breath control
what does taint breath control mean?

to elder chapels
do you mean old chapels?

as it's remnants begin to drift
again, this should be its*

I'm not really impressed dog.
Write something better
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