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Join Date: Feb 2013
Posts: 2,533
Battle Record: 26-9
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The tool pop! I’ll travel cross the border just to spark rugers/
Think Montreal screwjob...a Canadian’ll get the snub from a sharpshoota/ Cool. Had to look it up This nigga dyin. I’ll catch him at Dinner Time, then line n squeeze it/ Chelsea shit...It’ll be a fucking Hazard if I put this 10 on Blue shirt while he Eden/ Had to look up as well. But this was cool even with just the '10 on Blue shirt' wp, working in the other connections as well made it more impressive. Good shit. I don’t have to let the K blam. I’ll put the guns down if you want the fade, fam/ I got great hands...I’ll start punching without the arms - I’m Ray Man/ Another I had to look up. It's cool. Home invasion! Catch you wifey sleepin - I got a the cal for her/ It’ll ‘air out the nose bad’ and get ya wifey ‘a wake’ like a loud snorer/ Not as smooth as your wp usually is from what I've seen but I still dug this bar. Creative and a little funny. This heater wet shit. He better leave when TECs spit/ Or get stretched out...I’ll put a body on the handle like a bmx trick/ Cool. Tryna box it out? That’s stupid bruh. I DON’T fight fair - this dude is fucked/ Razor tucked! This nigga in the wrong place askin for the fade...end up wit Supercuts/ LOL good. Wording on this is well done. U never been in pussy...but you can finally get the box when this thang blast/ Drive by! I’ll paint a virgin through the window like a stain glass/ pretty good ur a chump n’ a lame. Week 2 you blew then got sonned n’ ashamed anyone w/ ‘Skilsaw a Body’.. you got ripped-apart like Resin put one thru ur frame Had to look up. It's cool. gun in his waistband?!! he aint rollin in the blackest Chevy w/ a mac & dezzy if Black Tux & is Suited for Murder.. they finally got’em dressed & his casket’s ready heh pretty good he better come prepared. i’ll creep on em w/ a glock til hes sick n’ squeamish or Roll w/ a Sub…either way an ‘Arms at his Back ready to POP’ if this Chicken Wing it not bad. The wp is a little tenuous. Passable but not heavy you’re a fake G that’d sell out ya boys. “yeahh that’s him if you say so cop” a snake in the grass ‘Slytherin in the background’.. its only right u take this Drako Shot Drako shot is cool but the sytherin wp is done and meh. See it all the time on fb on corny memes like a pic of Draco and a "Hey girl can I Slytherin to your pants?" caption pistol whip his bitch too. he can't stop me, she’ll feel her brain expire i’ll blow through Black & Decker w/ the Tool... no refund or exchange required LOL good. Worded well. kill ya whole fam if i ran thru ya house & started sprayin the tech even ya Antacid get Popped.. give that bitch a wholee different kinda pain in her chest I don't know why this bar isn't getting more love. It's LOTB for me. "Aunt ass'd" - it works perfectly, I've never seen that wp before, and it's flipped/worded in a funny and harsh way. Good shit. you get worse every verse. every bar you drop is played you queer & while a tax slip.. i’m laughin at the fact urs says "Jabari - made 35k this year" OK wp but worded/flipped well to get that extra punch This battle seems to be pretty polarising. I thought it was close. In Jabari's favour is that all of his bars were 'cool' or better, whereas Blue had the Slytherin thing I was meh about and the chicken wing line I thought was just OK. In Blue's favor is the LOTB (although Supercuts wasn't far behind so that's not a huge factor) and the fact I only had to look up one of his references compared with three from Jabari, which does factor into the enjoyment of it. One other thing would be the creativity in the wordplay flips - he used a "like" one time, everything else was flipped in a way to get an extra punch in or enhance the effect of the line. E.g. instead of "ya Antacid get popped like that bitch had heartburn" it's "ya Antacid get popped - give her a whole new pain in the chest". That rates highly with me. Overall I gotta say I enjoyed his verse a little more, even if he was a little less consistent. Good showing fellas. Look forward to more verses from both of you. V/ Blue
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