Flesh: GHOST and HOST and Proton Packs

Geno · 02-04-2019, 11:27 PM

Thia is pretty amazing. Loved a lot of things.

Pharaohs Army · 02-10-2019, 10:33 PM

Reads like a train-of-thought type of work. You touch on many subjects ranging from Jesus to movies to 9/11.

Began and ended with "where is my soul". Still don't really know what it's about but you packed a lot of rhymes in here. So many rhymes that I noticed when there wasn't a rhyme

"Djangos built the world. Including the Sphinx in ancient Kemet".
Riveting. Rivers. Amazon, Mississippi, the Yucatan Peninsula.

But then shortly thereafter you have Inuits and into it

It's a cool read I suppose. Though I guess if I had to choose I would pick a rhymey topical of yours over this type of thing

02-04-2019, 11:27 PM	#1
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02-10-2019, 10:33 PM	#2
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Reads like a train-of-thought type of work. You touch on many subjects ranging from Jesus to movies to 9/11. Began and ended with "where is my soul". Still don't really know what it's about but you packed a lot of rhymes in here. So many rhymes that I noticed when there wasn't a rhyme "Djangos built the world. Including the Sphinx in ancient Kemet". Riveting. Rivers. Amazon, Mississippi, the Yucatan Peninsula. But then shortly thereafter you have Inuits and into it It's a cool read I suppose. Though I guess if I had to choose I would pick a rhymey topical of yours over this type of thing