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Old 11-17-2018, 09:03 PM   #1
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Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
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Old 11-18-2018, 09:02 PM   #2
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Wolverine’s Verse:


You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
1/3
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
2/3
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
1/3
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
2/3
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
1/3
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
1/3
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.
1/3
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Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
2/3
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
2/3
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
3/3
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
1/3
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
1/3
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
2/3
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
1/3
12/21

v. Cyclops...more consistent
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Old 11-19-2018, 02:07 AM   #3
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Wolverine’s Verse:

With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits.
No
Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance,
Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand.
Ight
So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes,
Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses.
Simple
Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge,
Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends.
No
So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight?
Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night!
Oh ok
That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics,
Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status.
Incisor status eh
So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams
Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team.
Ok
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Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run
Hey my name is in this cool
X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker
Like the rhyme
Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart
Ok
Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body
Statement
Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film
He got a bald head I see you
You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?
Wolverine a savage tho
Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
What is a cyke eval
Cyclops had some cool stuff and better structure I guess neither was harsh but that's hard in this shit I guess

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Old 11-19-2018, 03:14 PM   #4
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Cyclops’ Verse:


Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun..
Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run

okay

X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper?
We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker

nice reference

Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part..
You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart

dope shit bruh

Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky..
Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body

just okay

Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill..
Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film

ehhhh didn’t like this as much if I’m honest

You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch..
& How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch?

nah

Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams..
No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team
coo closer

This is close to be real, some real nice ish in both verses along with a few dry spots each

I actually have Wolverine winning here, just seemed to be more I liked to be real

Cyclops had some shit though, can see it going either way
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