Knucklehead vs Sharp[OPEN [KNUCK WINS]

Adonis · 10-08-2018, 01:57 AM

Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me.

just cause you put a coma, in the
middle of a sentence don't make
it haiku. What's unfeeling?

Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle.

Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets.

Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3

v/Khead

10-08-2018, 01:57 AM	#5
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me. just cause you put a coma, in the middle of a sentence don't make it haiku. What's unfeeling? Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle. Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets. Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3 v/Khead __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

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