Flow (0-0) vs Big Bolo(0-1) - Flow wins

~RustyGunZ~ · 09-04-2018, 01:03 PM

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!

creative but also kind of stupid. maybe where you're from the gang gets together and plots their night of graphing paper with mechanical pencils but where i'm from we don't

This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since

too simple

Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party

dont get it

Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC

cool idea but worded poorly

I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production

nah

He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table

you didn't use fable in a way that is accurate to the english language. do you shit on your coffee table? man this was all over the place. all fours and coffee table could have had an ill connection. @Hush maybe this could be a bar you take and reword and rework for that segment you were talking about.

Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson

period/leaking blood is very played

Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool

cool

Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight

no. simple as fuck man.

U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar

nah

4

vs

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day

ok

Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor

dope

Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars

nah

N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body

nah

Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny

ehh

Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1

ok, lots of movie bars in this verse lol

Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear

nah

Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges

cool

N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name

swag poopy

N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding

ok

6

had LOTB with the mug on the floor

v/flow

both need to work on wording, bolos is too simple and he forces words that don't work in actual sentences and uses connections that are either bland or over thought. flow bars seem kind of long winded and some stuff just needs more structure

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09-04-2018, 01:03 PM	#11
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u! creative but also kind of stupid. maybe where you're from the gang gets together and plots their night of graphing paper with mechanical pencils but where i'm from we don't This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since too simple Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly! I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party dont get it Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC cool idea but worded poorly I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production nah He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table you didn't use fable in a way that is accurate to the english language. do you shit on your coffee table? man this was all over the place. all fours and coffee table could have had an ill connection. @Hush maybe this could be a bar you take and reword and rework for that segment you were talking about. Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson period/leaking blood is very played Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool cool Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight no. simple as fuck man. U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar nah 4 vs Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day ok Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor dope Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars nah N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body nah Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny ehh Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1 ok, lots of movie bars in this verse lol Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear nah Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges cool N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name swag poopy N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding ok 6 had LOTB with the mug on the floor v/flow both need to work on wording, bolos is too simple and he forces words that don't work in actual sentences and uses connections that are either bland or over thought. flow bars seem kind of long winded and some stuff just needs more structure