Flow (0-0) vs Big Bolo(0-1) - Flow wins

[Hush]

NBL Season 11
Week 2

Due SUNDAY 9/02/18

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT
- IF NOT AGREED, MUST MATCH 1st VERSE


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Big Bolo]

Lol I guess sometimes you do get what you want. 12-14.


Edit: Sent 14 to @Hush @Flow

[Hush]

Confirmed @Flow

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Hush

Confirmed @Flow

Ext. I'll as fuck

[Big Bolo]

Ext? Ok well Was 14, its 20 now....hope you feel better....NOT!

Originally Posted by Flow

Oh yeah. I forgot playoffs were coming. I should probably pull my finger out.

Originally Posted by Flow

Means I need to stop fucking around an actually write properly

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar

[Flow]

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding

There's ya 20 faggot

[For Battling]

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
decent
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
lmal @ blue eyes with the picket fence. This is pretty solid as a personal
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
good personal
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
i have an iPhone, I don’t get this
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
this is OK
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
lol nah
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
decent
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
i don’t get it
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
lol nah this is a no
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
the concept had potential but fell flat here


2 good
1 ok
2 Decent
5 misses


Vs



Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
alright
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
whats keyser soze? Decent here I think
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
im not seeing the connection here
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
key on ouuuu? Sigh, you already know what I’m gonna say here
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
super stretched line here bro
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
decent
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
nah
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
more avengers lines. But nah this one was cool & swaggy. Good stuff
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
nah
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
alright pretty cool here


2 good
1 ok
2 Decent
5 misses


Pshhh literally identical in verse quality here, can go either way but oddly enough I think bolos good lines were better than flows on a personal level.


Vote Big Bolo



PS: NEVER GO 20 LINES AGAIN IF YOU EXPECT THE BATTLE TO GET VOTES

[John Dillinger]

Originally Posted by Big Bolo

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
Not bad
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Lol not too strong but this was funny
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
Not feeling it
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
Cool
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
Kinda weak
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
Lol coulda been done better but funny
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Not bad
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
Kind of obscure I'm guessing this has to do with photo shop, not terrible but kind of a soft punch
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
Good concept I guess but worded bad
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
Nah cause a lot of people drop late but the concept was good maybe tie it in with something else besides 'Cashius bar'

Originally Posted by Flow

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
Not bad
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
Not feeling it
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
Nah
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
Nah
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
Stretched but I liked the concept here
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
Better
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
Cool
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
Nah
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
Nahh
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
Damn this could have been ill, you did alright w/ it

Going w/ Bolo here

You both had some misses but his didn't miss as hard as Flow's.

Some of Flow was a little too stretched and he could have done more w/ the concepts if he delivered them better.

Bolo had funnier lines imo even tho all of them weren't big hitters

[~RustyGunZ~]

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!

creative but also kind of stupid. maybe where you're from the gang gets together and plots their night of graphing paper with mechanical pencils but where i'm from we don't

This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since

too simple

Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party

dont get it

Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC

cool idea but worded poorly

I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production

nah

He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table

you didn't use fable in a way that is accurate to the english language. do you shit on your coffee table? man this was all over the place. all fours and coffee table could have had an ill connection. @Hush maybe this could be a bar you take and reword and rework for that segment you were talking about.

Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson

period/leaking blood is very played

Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool

cool

Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight

no. simple as fuck man.

U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar

nah

4

vs

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day

ok

Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor

dope

Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars

nah

N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body

nah

Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny

ehh

Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1

ok, lots of movie bars in this verse lol

Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear

nah

Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges

cool

N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name

swag poopy

N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding

ok

6

had LOTB with the mug on the floor

v/flow

both need to work on wording, bolos is too simple and he forces words that don't work in actual sentences and uses connections that are either bland or over thought. flow bars seem kind of long winded and some stuff just needs more structure

[Hush]

Originally Posted by Big Bolo

Ext? Ok well Was 14, its 20 now....hope you feel better....NOT!







Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
...ok cool
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
...bland . Really nothing concrete here
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
....nah
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
...don’t get it
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
...nah
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
....eh so so
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
....wack
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
....huh?
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
....ehhh
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
.....nah

Originally Posted by Flow

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
....ok
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
....eh
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
....nah
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
....huh?
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
...nice
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
...lol too many words
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
...ok
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
....ok
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
....I like that
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
...ok

There's ya 20 faggot

Flow got it

[Witty]

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
Ok...not bad
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Nah
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
You could have done way more with this...fell a bit flat
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
Not really a diss?
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
No
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
Awfully fable? What does that mean? I don't get it...didn't like this
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Nah wasn't feeling it...too wordy
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
Not bad
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
Nah very very basic
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
Nah

vs.

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
ok
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
I like this a lot
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
Nah
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
I don't know what you were going for here?
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
ok-ish....wordy
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
nah
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
nah
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
Ok
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
not really feeling tbh
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
Cool

Flow got it quite easily tbh...but both can do better.

Vote - Flow

[Amen]

Originally Posted by Big Bolo

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!
Ok concept but executed ineffectively, bro. Was more or so statement'ish rather then an insult, if that makes any sense? Does to me.
This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since
Pretty basic. Pretty much same as bar above, bro.
Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party
Lol, basic but cool jab here. Could have been executed harsher but ok none the less. Got a chuckle out of me which is what you should AIM for if you are going to stay writing on the basic side, dude.
Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC
Don't know what you're talking about.
I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production
No idea what you are referencing here either.
He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table
This doesn't make much sense to me? On all fours and taking shit all day? What does that have to do with a Coffee table?
Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson
Light jab.
Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool
What? What's a lasso tool?
Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight
Like the concept, hate the execution.
U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar
Who's par? This bar doesn't make much sense to me either.

Originally Posted by Flow

Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day
Like the concept - not the execution. I think it would have been better if not executed with a simile.
Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor
Don't understand this.
Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars
Light.
N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body
Get the reference, however the delivery/wording and execution sucked.
Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny
Again, get the reference but wording, delivery and execution was bad.
Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1
Light.
Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear
Wording bad.
Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges
Don't watch these types of movies so not sure what you are referencing here.
N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name
Nobody concepts are overdone. Not enough of a fresh execution to pass.
N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding
This was clean. Nice overall and probably your best well rounded bar as far as the concept, it's wording, how it was delivered and executed.

I got FLOW here. Bolo's got the rhyming/structure aspect of text battling down. He needs to work on his concepts and executing them more harsh and effectively.

[DynamiCz]

Havin trouble dude? go have a couple brews with u know who
Be sure u have him map out da night, but word is diablo already draws up bars for u!

Stretched a bit, but I like the personal aspect of this here

This mfer signed outta 1-2 after losin to Mr. Blue eyes with the picket fence
Went back in a week later and to nobodies surprise...haven't won a battle ever since

Lmaooo…I like this here as well. Funny jab for me

Round after round gettin fucked like Flo REAL....hardly!
I see it like dis...he was fed up & decided vs cash to have his own comin out party

Ehh, decent....the execution is light here imo

Name chosen startin with F? Nah homie listen bolo was born a G
Cuz when I slide by every alpha with the finger movin I aint txtn on my HTC

Hmmm...the concept is creative I guess....wording coo so I will let this slide

I'm like quick draw mcgraw its over ur gone! u'aint seen what I'm bustin
Ya fam beggin the news to blast ur face over the TV like a new Marvel production

This could have been worded way better honestly...this was a miss for me

He don't make any money workin those long hours, don't front ur awfully fable
When he really on all fours & take shit all day, profile occupation: The coffee table

This was light here, didn't like this one to much

Figure out wat he dreamin of, gut ur fav place like I'm remodeling a kitchen
sick? Riiight its that time of the month so his head isn't the only place'll be leakin crimson

This is coo here, a little stretched in places also tho

Working all night? were not sure what you do give a fuck tho, I'll blast this fool
Got a straight shot to his dome but I aint holdin down Alt with the lasso tool

Niceeee here

Flow isn't one of the greats on board that flight has been in flight
Ur moves all yesterdays news like current posts when clock strikes midnight

This was coo here, light on the effective side, but still ok

U a bitch I can see it from a far, flow couldn't even get past par
I'm an eagle to this wolF dropped in at the last minute like its a Cashius bar

Nice closer here


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Fuck a drive by I'll invade your entire neighborhood when I spray
Glocks from every direction like the whole street against you, Denzil in Training Day

Stretched, but I like this opener here. Execution could have been better, but its all good

Your no Keyser Soze, no upset win for the retard pretending he's more
Cus if we see a Big twist at the end its after ive smashed his fuckin mug to the floor

Didn't like this one here to much, miss for me here

Got more in store for you then what you failed to beat so far, bolognaise n bland bars
Shit you struggled with the source so much Prego wanna use your face to brand jars

Lol, this was decent here

N this clown mask robberies wit the swayze pulls, shits so shoddy
Cus this Keanu faggot only trys to shoot after hes fallen an caught a body

This is ok here, could have been worded way better tho….execution is so so

Jobless geek, hes playing D an D while im fuckin chicks n sipping henny
I make a Big Bang for my buck, you can't even watch the show without thinkin how you'd do anything for a penny

Lol, nice jab here!

Yankee gun bars stunned by a European villain with C4 at the thumb
Yet soon as i unstrap the peice it will be your body falling from the top like him in die hard 1

I like how this was worded here, nice again imo

Son the limes got speed signs saying youll never reach my level, not even near
I had Clocked your Number on the Board before I even stepped up a Gear

Ehh, decent, the execution is light kinda

Chase you around the house with the chopper, bullets for days bitch
my Hammer shooting through every wall like Thors did in Dr Stranges

The Thor/hammer lines are misses for me, I see wayyyy to many.

N no one seen schad for ages cus my personal game insane
To you id do the same, but your such a nobody even after this body I wont remember your name

Lmao, cool here

N adding 6 lines shows you shook kid, need ya sheep to vote or I've took this strolling
An if Lil Bo Peep again I'll give him a bigger Hook then the one shes known for holding

Ight closer here....


This match was close as hell honestly, I both have you with 2 misses each.....Overall I have to lean it to FLOW. His bars were a little but more harsh on the execution side imo. Bolo is getting this down packed tho I can say that for sure. Kinda clean up the wording and execute ya punches more harsh with ya concepts. You will be good tho. Dope shit to both!

V-Flow