A believer

[dead man]

comparing yourself to these hollow, deified caricatures will get tiring after a while.

stating in no uncertain terms that you are a philosophical genius or that you're the greatest writer while showcasing neither is not a strong persuasive strategy.

subject matter is not entirely interesting because of this point alone.

Cakebrah also has a great point. i'm not going to enforce any kind of feedback link rule for you obv cause thats not what we do here. but don't abuse it and spam all of your verses in a week without offering commentary of your own, its just uncool.