LIGHTNING ROUND: BodySnatcher (5-3) vs. Ryno (1-2) - BS WINS

Jabari Black · 08-13-2018, 10:31 PM

Lol rhyno I like the concept. Funny np. The wording wasn’t bad but the phrase ‘to have my homie leave him drilled like a bitch’ was a bit flat. This also coulda benefited from a better/more tie ins.

Body I think your punch was even funnier. Good concept. Execution was pretty good. Only critique is the execution was lazy. It woulda took a while to get if I didn’t have a gif. I do think the concept carried you though.

You didn’t enough to squeak by with he win but not by much cus Rhyno was on ya ass.

Rhyno I see you bruh. Been having good punches but you’ve just been put in front of better competition.

Mvgt Body

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08-13-2018, 10:31 PM	#12
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Lol rhyno I like the concept. Funny np. The wording wasn’t bad but the phrase ‘to have my homie leave him drilled like a bitch’ was a bit flat. This also coulda benefited from a better/more tie ins. Body I think your punch was even funnier. Good concept. Execution was pretty good. Only critique is the execution was lazy. It woulda took a while to get if I didn’t have a gif. I do think the concept carried you though. You didn’t enough to squeak by with he win but not by much cus Rhyno was on ya ass. Rhyno I see you bruh. Been having good punches but you’ve just been put in front of better competition. Mvgt Body