Contenders Match: Blue Bayou (3-0) vs. bleak (3-0) - BLEAK WINS

Jabari Black · 07-15-2018, 10:23 PM

Dope battle. Both came with it.

Bleak imo you’ve always had great concepts but find someway to fumble it in the end lol. Wasn’t the case here. Good concept and clean executions. Only critique I have is I’ve never heard a sick referred to as a sword. Not a fan of using slang and phrases that you wouldn’t normally use to make the punch work. But overall really good punch.

Blue had a good punch as well. Coliseum was slick af. Maybe it’s my accent but it works and is creative. My critiique is I think you tried to do to much at the end of the punch. I may be completely bugging but I swore your ounchnread ‘one coliseum collapsed’ which would have worked with the double meaning flawlessly. I could be completely trippin but regardless, by using ‘rocked piece by piece’ it loses a part of the double meaning. Still good punch but I got Bleaks being slightly cleaner.

Mvgt Bleak

Salute to both

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07-15-2018, 10:23 PM	#18
Jabari Black Sun Tzu Join Date: Mar 2018 Location: Atlanta, GA Posts: 550 Battle Record: 13-6 Champed - Battle Arena League - 1-2 Punch League - Netcees Battle League - Netcees SOL Rep Power: 12764499	Dope battle. Both came with it. Bleak imo you’ve always had great concepts but find someway to fumble it in the end lol. Wasn’t the case here. Good concept and clean executions. Only critique I have is I’ve never heard a sick referred to as a sword. Not a fan of using slang and phrases that you wouldn’t normally use to make the punch work. But overall really good punch. Blue had a good punch as well. Coliseum was slick af. Maybe it’s my accent but it works and is creative. My critiique is I think you tried to do to much at the end of the punch. I may be completely bugging but I swore your ounchnread ‘one coliseum collapsed’ which would have worked with the double meaning flawlessly. I could be completely trippin but regardless, by using ‘rocked piece by piece’ it loses a part of the double meaning. Still good punch but I got Bleaks being slightly cleaner. Mvgt Bleak Salute to both