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06-25-2018, 03:49 AM
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I liked Body's bar but gotta concur with what was previously mentioned, what you said I've heard a lot of, bro. Plot...hmm def not your best...I get the biker line though especially livin' in OZ, it was poorly worded yet I felt you did more with the line before imo. V - Plot. |
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