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Join Date: Aug 2014
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"The Climb" (2009)
the morning spoke in tongues... through light something born out of hope that couldn't trust the night or pay the toll, he saw another life another chance to grow and make something right before his mother woke, he was out of sight a letter on her bed... like he was better off dead before she even read it... she knew what it said all he saw was red through the greyhound window escaped through sound and counted all his sins, slow now he's fate bound, the amount of bullshit he knows surrounds him, he's bound, he starts to drown as the city grows the more he sees the less he knows the more he needs, the less he owes a tortured seed that was blessed to glow got absorbed by the streets & the wretched show but called by the beaches and the plateaus had to let it go.... and seek higher ground the path was a road on a map he found tracking his soul like a basset hound all he had was the clothes on his back, he's crowned the last from the old school to pass it down chalk and cardboard, stalking a forgotten lord chopping thoughts with a sword, striking an odd chord caught up in the horde, but moving on toward something else, never really felt no kinda love for himself now he's marching on, across suburban lawns sparked by the dawn, somehow it turned him on the role of stranger, got to know his anger was told by the scrolls no one's alone in the manger but he couldn't get past it... took it and passed it shoulda been outlasted, crooked tooth half wit plastic, placid, tried to mask shit, so sarcastic his heart was spastic, drastic, elastic, his hands are quick uncovered buried hope, recaptured the magic while the ferry floated on the sad and tragic re-creations of a demon nation he was trying to escape from his face was numbed by the winds of change in this place he had come looking at this mountain... like a childs first step seemed monumental... designed by Imhotep chasing down a temple, truth is quiet if it's kept ...his stomach rumbles as he struggles through the jungle befuddled by this puzzled feeling muzzled wants to guzzle life with every muscle, being righteous is a hustle he started seeing prayer flags... half out of breath, he didn't care... taking drags stares through heavy bags, wants to jack some spirit swag fearlessly he tags, the moment with his mind behold, he sees a shrine, Gary Oak leaves shine spoke of the divine, he felt open and entwined with a bigger web of time, accepted it was undefined gave himself over... be a slave or a soldier he saw a monk in the distance and said "state what you know sir" " is faith the only cure?... can a man ever know 'pure'? how can you be sure?... to me it's just a blur..." the monks eyes glowed, he said " There's something I know... but if you want grace, then succumb to what you owe.."
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