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Old 06-01-2018, 08:18 AM   #21
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Originally Posted by Muff's BAL ROAST Verse
What in the entire FUCK. thissa holy disgrace
Names 69': Well it suits you : u got pussy ridden all over yur face
This was ok. Nothing heavy or anything because it was such an obvious angle.
Who gave you a mic. Fool, Yur lame & its trife
How u go from looking like a foreign exchange student to not goin 2 school a day in ur life
Ok.
Recent pic is telling . Trusttt, his brodies aware
U tell someone 2 to "go against the grain ' : & its jus ur homie combing your hair
Didn't like this one much.
You gettin no ass . Bro you smell of inferior
Cropped half the bitch face out the pic but we can still tell that she's hideous
Nah, wack.
Listen i dont envision that youll ever even sniff the top
That scarf is an Infinity Knot: like wen ppl ask if I listen to the shit u drop
LOL, you lying. I know you bump 69 nigga... You bumping Lil peep, Lil wheep, and Lil mo...
That first pic is death . Gawdd homie, its morbid
& its clear that THATS a little broad : well my nigga, so is ur forehead
Ok.
why that picture though? the moment is harddly important
Now presenting:" the first nigga in our family to NOT get deported"
This was ok, needed something, I felt.
That relationship weird. Its dumb scary, my mans
Here's the naked truth. She's holding you like she's the one wearin the pants
Nah.
That 2nd pic is tragic :bro stop the despair
Can't see the Game w/ Hanson: but mmm BOP nigga ur rocking their hair
Didn't like this.
Fact u talked shit to him? That's a blatant arrest
Ur not raps Heir Apparent you jus need to b deprived from taking a breath
Cool concept, wording was rough.
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Originally Posted by BodySnatcher's BAL ROAST Verse
I’m takin candy from babies & in return I leave`em eatin pistols
Hit this Airhead with heat seekin missiles & when this Starburst he'll start leakin Skittles
Like the concept, but to me the execution was mildly gay and soft.
Nigga looks like he failed study hall writing a new ballad on how to shoot rapid
These are culinary school pics…he went from bein prep & straight to fruit salad
Lol, this was ok.
I mean you could be Goldust’s side-kick...or even side-bitch in that uniform
He looks like the type of nigga that`d pull up on someone ridin on a unicorn
Mildly gay.
In the shadows I’ve ben stiller than statues waitin for him to make bad moves
The way I see it...if I need cash..I’ma pull a lick & stick`em just like his tattoos
Concept there - execution was soft.
Damn nigga...what are thoooose!? LOL...I’m dead nigga where is my bouquet
Cause those are the most generic tattoos I’ve seen since I ran out VC on 2k
Not sure what you are talking about here and I don't google so yea... And the "LOL" SHIT in your own verses kill it for me... Corny, don't do it. THat's like you trying to force a funny.
In the words of Riley…nigga you gay…ask him if he’s queer & if he dare lies
I’ll pay his stylist to put clips in his head & this idiot said I love barrettes & hair ties
This was ok.
Amen...is this your King up in NY?...Bet you feel like he raps to your soul
I mean I guess it makes sense...because one looks & the other acts like a Troll
TO answer the question no, he's trash. But the troll shit fits.
You’re bitch made & made for bitches so I bet you get played by the same hoe, right?
I can’t believe you recreated yourself as the live size version of the doll Rainbow Brite
Wording rocky. Concept there but again the execution was soft.
This was actually close... I do think Muff edged it, tho if I'm being fair here. Body's got the mechanic's down which him and I have discussed - I'm just not a fan of his executions the majority of the time. Conceptually he's straight - I just think he flops on the execution.

There is my take, since it was asked I dropped my opinion on the verses.

inb4 wack amen tag makers lol... (what does amen think?) hahaa... You faggot dick riders.
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