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Exis · 05-14-2018, 07:54 AM

I find your flow choppy @ times, if you write to a beat that obviously makes sense especially when Idk what you writin' too...I copy & pasted it then structured it to how I'd pen it up & it was alot smoother...the first bar is flames, the rest was really solid...I'm not sure if I've read anythin' from you before but yeah, first impressions be impressive man.

Stay upwards.

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05-14-2018, 07:54 AM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I find your flow choppy @ times, if you write to a beat that obviously makes sense especially when Idk what you writin' too...I copy & pasted it then structured it to how I'd pen it up & it was alot smoother...the first bar is flames, the rest was really solid...I'm not sure if I've read anythin' from you before but yeah, first impressions be impressive man. Stay upwards.