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Old 05-30-2013, 11:17 AM   #6
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This was pretty hard all the way around. Like the previous have stated vulgar just destroyed this but in actuality i think everyone else did an excellent job as well. Im on my phone so forgive the brief break down and sloppy format.

I was blessed within a time, when up & comers had a paladin’s crestA system of honor, a callous with breadth, a proving ground, challengers trekkedWho now crash and burned, Challenger’s ledge, ask in turn, it matters what’s left:Ancient wisdoms at least a decade older than the pubic hair on Malachi’s headI was born with a matrix-bent spoon that was dispatched in ghastly lightYou were born with a silver spoon that Lama pawned before he sold out the site

Along with the mett bro's line this was my favorite portion from u vulg, you're just a nasty dude with a gift for rhyming which definitely earned my respect.

Who cares 'bout kings if they're happy with bronze?You can't battle our shit with an army of pawns.We're pros, you're steadily defending the definition of cons,You can't stomach your position if you're battling krohns.You're wack as shit, so people talkin' crap aint odd,And I'll drive over his crew 'till it's part of the paintjob.Everyone got freedom writes but ya'll abuse it,blind atheists praise God for you not doing music.

This along with the ralph line was my fav, i think the word paintjob was a little sticky right there but still worked. I definitely dug your verse and the flow besides that was word was just top notch.


Ok you natural bitch -so maybe hiphop really just isn't your moveOughta play a saxaphone tho, the way you PM'ing gen singing the bluesRediculous move, but fuck it -he's gone, even knuck can't stand fagotsSo watch endsane buy a first class ticket, nd jump on his banned wagonMy clans had it, and I gives a fuck if u think ur better than me doodUr Nomads best, only cuz sik left with the rest of the inteligent people

This was just hard hitting and thats what i like about you geno, you dont write a lot of bullshit to lead up to your punches, you just trow haymakers all the time. The feedback about the chorus slayed me for real. Dope collab guys. Enjoyed the read and thanks for feedin my piece geno
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