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04-26-2018, 06:45 PM
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death warmed over
Join Date: Jan 2013
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I dont know sorry good piece man i guess..... try shortening verse getting to the point a little quicker i guess get to the ending you seem fast to me with the rhymes go outt like me man like a sucker....shorten the verse.... er sumn.... and domt go looking for rhymes or focusing on rhymes i dont know why people are so interested by this stupid shit your just rhyming two words sorry man to like diss on the rhyming art but yeah this web site is kind of weird ya dig.....
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