Violence Review ft. Sammy

Lucipher Howlz · 04-04-2018, 01:14 AM

Sammy and Self...of course you guys will give me something to read and make me think more than my mind really wants to at this moment...but I"m ready to appreciate you two collabin'...In my opinion 2 of my all time favorites...

Sammy: I know I haven't been active that much. I just got on this site. For real tho Sammy this might be some of my favorite work from you. I won't say your best because I'm not gonna lie, some of your shit goes over my head and that's my fault not yours. Your vocab and way of wording is way above me most of the time. You just have this crazy intelligent way of writing and I love it. Your first 2 segments were dope as fuck. Sometimes you lose me on the flow but that was not the case here. I had to google pyrrhic for its definition but damn bro....What a way to open up a topic. Doing something thats a supposed victory at the time but really the victor is the one that is gonna suffer the consequence. Now I see the word Yahweh's in your next segment. (had to google that too) and now I think I know what its all about. I love shit like this. You made me do research and I appreciate that. I just want to point out that your flow really did stand out on this tho. from matters collide to the end of that segment was top notch. it was your personal style..."insane expedition- time passed.....and there came a condition-" the way it was set up was fucking smooth. The rest of the verse was so fucking dope! that wording and flow was amazing. Your last segment was cool. It set the tone for the message. A nice ending. I did notice that you refered to violence as a woman. Not that it means anything but you got me thinking so hopefully I got you thinking...lol...I loved this verse from you Sammy...might be my favorite from you.

Self: One of my favorites of all time. To be honest when I first read your shit on LA I was like ehhh he's doing too much and overrated. But it was me being lazy as fuck and not really paying attention to your story, intelligence and you concepts. I was bored of the same shit LA was producing and was assuming you were just part of that. OH I was wrong big time.

"Is violence necessary
or just a lack of enlightenment?
Does it come from within
or from a tragic environment?
Maybe it's passion
that incites and inspires it
an appetite of entitlement
that can spread like a virus when
the desires of men
ignite and catch fire
in a climate of sin?
"But why does violence exist?"
Well, the science is this,
It's a glitch in our system
no one is trying to fix!
"I won't deny that it is.""-----yeah...point proven. I'm so jealous how you can switch the length of you bars and make a complete different format. Just like Sammy I can't see how you two can do that shit. This segment was raw to say the least.

"Then close your eyes and pretend
That it's an ironclad fist
that slowly tightens its grip
Around the throat of the weak
and those that meekly resist!
See our species is tempted
by primordial lust.
Instinctively seeking
to destroy and corrupt.
Just think of extinction
and all the creatures we've crushed
under the weight of our sooolesss
without an inkling of what ...
we've have done to the planet
-- such irreversible damage.
"Is all humanity cursed?"
Not if a person has chances.----C'mon dude. You make me mad inside that I gave up writing for a bit. It's funny...the way I look at shit you and sammy post since day one always made me so competitive even tho we were all fam. I always feel I have to out do you and sammy. In a respectful way.

"If your circuits are jammed
we can rework the mechanics.
Don't be a merchant of death
or a murderous bandit.
Cos instead of more blood
let's spills some hurt on the canvas.
I see the Earth as our campus,
but we're not learning the answers.
So concerned with the cancer
we stopped researching the grander ...
truth that's involved,
tho we'll closely examine
the phantom roots of its cause.
Due to Newtonian Law
the fruit doesn't fall
too far from its tree ...
à la Adam & Eve
in the Garden of Eden.
Symbolically speaking,
we think that a piece
Of that apple was evil
and she swallowed its seed
and gave birth to a demon
-- the Serpent offspring
of murder and treason!
We've nurtured this thesis
for 1000s of seasons
and tho its unfounded
and cloudy in reason
The Crown & our leaders
still count on us sheeple
to deeply believe it!
Cos freedom ain't free
unless people are bleeding!
The secret of kingdoms
-- deceitful yet genius!
If Jesus came back
we'd beat em and feed em
To weasels and rats!
A feasible act
if you read of our past
Like Medieval France
or Feudal Japan
or the Spanish Armada
That crossed the Atlantic
to rule the "new land"
through armies infected.
That's hardly a lesson
on the carnage we've caused,
We've sharpered our weapons
and nawled off our claws,
barbaric in essence,
we're less than a dog
Yet, think that we're better ...
"Til dolphins evole
and make us their pets
for all of our flaws!"
No mazel tov ya’ll!
We did not accomplished
a semblance of peace
in the Age of Pisces,
we swam the high seas
full of sodium chloride
and salty sardines,
which affected our vision
of who we could be,
thus ignorance & violence
became our I.D.
But the time of Aquarius
has finally arrived
and if violence continues
Homo-Sapien dies"

If this was LA this verse would have to be in the HOF. Bottom line. I don't toot anyone elses horn ever cus I'm stubborn and want to beat it...but damn dude. this was everything...flow message concept and everything was perfect.

What a collab....Please let me be on the next one so I can get challenged and really go off...dope shit from both of you.

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04-04-2018, 01:14 AM	#4
Lucipher Howlz Member Join Date: Mar 2018 Posts: 89 Rep Power: 4050152	Sammy and Self...of course you guys will give me something to read and make me think more than my mind really wants to at this moment...but I"m ready to appreciate you two collabin'...In my opinion 2 of my all time favorites... Sammy: I know I haven't been active that much. I just got on this site. For real tho Sammy this might be some of my favorite work from you. I won't say your best because I'm not gonna lie, some of your shit goes over my head and that's my fault not yours. Your vocab and way of wording is way above me most of the time. You just have this crazy intelligent way of writing and I love it. Your first 2 segments were dope as fuck. Sometimes you lose me on the flow but that was not the case here. I had to google pyrrhic for its definition but damn bro....What a way to open up a topic. Doing something thats a supposed victory at the time but really the victor is the one that is gonna suffer the consequence. Now I see the word Yahweh's in your next segment. (had to google that too) and now I think I know what its all about. I love shit like this. You made me do research and I appreciate that. I just want to point out that your flow really did stand out on this tho. from matters collide to the end of that segment was top notch. it was your personal style..."insane expedition- time passed.....and there came a condition-" the way it was set up was fucking smooth. The rest of the verse was so fucking dope! that wording and flow was amazing. Your last segment was cool. It set the tone for the message. A nice ending. I did notice that you refered to violence as a woman. Not that it means anything but you got me thinking so hopefully I got you thinking...lol...I loved this verse from you Sammy...might be my favorite from you. Self: One of my favorites of all time. To be honest when I first read your shit on LA I was like ehhh he's doing too much and overrated. But it was me being lazy as fuck and not really paying attention to your story, intelligence and you concepts. I was bored of the same shit LA was producing and was assuming you were just part of that. OH I was wrong big time. "Is violence necessary or just a lack of enlightenment? Does it come from within or from a tragic environment? Maybe it's passion that incites and inspires it an appetite of entitlement that can spread like a virus when the desires of men ignite and catch fire in a climate of sin? "But why does violence exist?" Well, the science is this, It's a glitch in our system no one is trying to fix! "I won't deny that it is.""-----yeah...point proven. I'm so jealous how you can switch the length of you bars and make a complete different format. Just like Sammy I can't see how you two can do that shit. This segment was raw to say the least. "Then close your eyes and pretend That it's an ironclad fist that slowly tightens its grip Around the throat of the weak and those that meekly resist! See our species is tempted by primordial lust. Instinctively seeking to destroy and corrupt. Just think of extinction and all the creatures we've crushed under the weight of our sooolesss without an inkling of what ... we've have done to the planet -- such irreversible damage. "Is all humanity cursed?" Not if a person has chances.----C'mon dude. You make me mad inside that I gave up writing for a bit. It's funny...the way I look at shit you and sammy post since day one always made me so competitive even tho we were all fam. I always feel I have to out do you and sammy. In a respectful way. "If your circuits are jammed we can rework the mechanics. Don't be a merchant of death or a murderous bandit. Cos instead of more blood let's spills some hurt on the canvas. I see the Earth as our campus, but we're not learning the answers. So concerned with the cancer we stopped researching the grander ... truth that's involved, tho we'll closely examine the phantom roots of its cause. Due to Newtonian Law the fruit doesn't fall too far from its tree ... à la Adam & Eve in the Garden of Eden. Symbolically speaking, we think that a piece Of that apple was evil and she swallowed its seed and gave birth to a demon -- the Serpent offspring of murder and treason! We've nurtured this thesis for 1000s of seasons and tho its unfounded and cloudy in reason The Crown & our leaders still count on us sheeple to deeply believe it! Cos freedom ain't free unless people are bleeding! The secret of kingdoms -- deceitful yet genius! If Jesus came back we'd beat em and feed em To weasels and rats! A feasible act if you read of our past Like Medieval France or Feudal Japan or the Spanish Armada That crossed the Atlantic to rule the "new land" through armies infected. That's hardly a lesson on the carnage we've caused, We've sharpered our weapons and nawled off our claws, barbaric in essence, we're less than a dog Yet, think that we're better ... "Til dolphins evole and make us their pets for all of our flaws!" No mazel tov ya’ll! We did not accomplished a semblance of peace in the Age of Pisces, we swam the high seas full of sodium chloride and salty sardines, which affected our vision of who we could be, thus ignorance & violence became our I.D. But the time of Aquarius has finally arrived and if violence continues Homo-Sapien dies" If this was LA this verse would have to be in the HOF. Bottom line. I don't toot anyone elses horn ever cus I'm stubborn and want to beat it...but damn dude. this was everything...flow message concept and everything was perfect. What a collab....Please let me be on the next one so I can get challenged and really go off...dope shit from both of you.