DEADMAN: PSYCHOSIS

Rude · 03-31-2018, 09:28 AM

I would normally do a more thorough breakdown and highlight which lines hit the hardest and what stuck out more, but I get the sense that you don't need me to do that as your wording has specifically highlighted those things. All I can say to this is Bravo...

Excellent work here. Wording/Flow/Prose/Literary Devices and content were all brilliantly used to tell your story and provoke emotion.

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03-31-2018, 09:28 AM	#3
Rude Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 65 Rep Power: 713770	I would normally do a more thorough breakdown and highlight which lines hit the hardest and what stuck out more, but I get the sense that you don't need me to do that as your wording has specifically highlighted those things. All I can say to this is Bravo... Excellent work here. Wording/Flow/Prose/Literary Devices and content were all brilliantly used to tell your story and provoke emotion.