Old topical verse

[Elemental P]

Originally Posted by ACTIVATE SELF

I'm familiar with the source material and I could argue a few decrepencies to a fault. But, my personal understanding of such matters would probably seem even more outlandish than the content you so graciously chose to bless us with here today. I'm a conspiracy theorist at heart that is on an eternal quest to find the ''truth''. Of course no such thing exist in singularity. But I digress.

I've written many pieces that tackle these sorts of topics. But I dig what you did here. Without fact checking I'd say your words read true and confidently. Your flow was simple but effective and your imagery was extremely interesting. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and would encourage you to do a follow up to this verse. I'd like to see how deep down the rabbit holes goes. This was good. Really good. Part 2? I'll keep my eyes peeled. Peace.

Thanks yo

[Elemental P]

I gave feed back on 3 posts and on Activate was cool enough to return the favor....this is why I don't fuck with this site on s hip-hop level....it's just a glorified trolling text forum nothing more. No body wants to give Actual feedback. But y'all bragged about how u guys give such dope feedback to help artists elevate....pff... Fucking lame. I just ain't gonna bother no more fuck it