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Elemental P · 03-16-2018, 01:54 PM

I like your topics Activate. You always bring something fresh, coming at this from different angles, wasn't exactly a plot twist I kinda caught on mid way what was gonna happen, but I felt you put more emotion in this than usual, almost as if you experienced something similar yourself. Rhyme scheme on point, flows smooth... Can't say much else but keep grinding homie.

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03-16-2018, 01:54 PM	#3
Elemental P Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 856 Rep Power: 4507456	I like your topics Activate. You always bring something fresh, coming at this from different angles, wasn't exactly a plot twist I kinda caught on mid way what was gonna happen, but I felt you put more emotion in this than usual, almost as if you experienced something similar yourself. Rhyme scheme on point, flows smooth... Can't say much else but keep grinding homie.