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03-16-2018, 08:48 AM
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White Earl
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Thought this flowed well. Had some really dope shit in it but at times had some forced concepts for the sake of the rhyme.. Which is ok. But i feel like you did it just a touch to many times. None the less. I enjoyed this read and rly hope to see more from you man. Really dig the name btw. Keep writing!
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