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Old 03-02-2018, 07:37 AM   #2
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Not bad.. pretty good with the pen.. but you sound like youre reading.. it lacks personality.. the rhthym is redundant. Mobb deep blessed this beat. You got to stop following the pattern of your writing so mechanically.
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