Sour Joog 4-1 Vs Joe Boston 3-0 - JOOG WINS

[Pinot Grij]

Boston -- best lines were Nipsey ,, but that's a real stretch to begin with. You gotta cross like 4 different bridges to get to the punchline. He steals coke, he sells the coke, but he's still too broke to afford shoes, the shoes would be needed to run victory laps, ps don't forget about the wordplay! I think you gotta cut down on the amount of turns your line takes, cuz the more mechanisms you have in there, the greater the opportunity for the voter to get lost, bored and give up on the line.

Diggin for Gold is aight too -- but the connection isn't 100% direct.

Joog -- Come Together was a solid personal. few other cool lines.

the difference here is Joog's simplistic approach compared to Boston's convoluted approach. Joog's had more impact because it was stripped down and direct. Boston required you to jump through hoops to get to the pay off, which lessened the impact.

Vote -- Joog