Contenders Match: Habitat (6-3) vs. Profit (5-3) - HABITAT WINS

Pinot Grij · 02-17-2018, 12:47 PM

Habitat -- foregiveness/heart line was dooope. I try to play with concepts like this sometimes but can never seem to stick them. Otherwise, some good jabs but the wordplay just felt a lil unoriginal.. Samoa, Farewell, All Rights Reserved... it was cool but not attention grabbing.. closer was nice too.

Profit
Speaking of jabs -- Profit had some decent little lines, but I didn't feel a knockout punch or a clever line that really ended it for me. Sour diesel is cool -- RB is aight -- boy band feels like it comes out of nowhere. I guess I feel like there wasn't a lot of pointed, harsh lines towards your enemy. Maybe it was a wording thing, but it felt off.

Vote -- Habitat ... that forgiveness line was the knockout punch in this one for me

02-17-2018, 12:47 PM	#10
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Habitat -- foregiveness/heart line was dooope. I try to play with concepts like this sometimes but can never seem to stick them. Otherwise, some good jabs but the wordplay just felt a lil unoriginal.. Samoa, Farewell, All Rights Reserved... it was cool but not attention grabbing.. closer was nice too. Profit Speaking of jabs -- Profit had some decent little lines, but I didn't feel a knockout punch or a clever line that really ended it for me. Sour diesel is cool -- RB is aight -- boy band feels like it comes out of nowhere. I guess I feel like there wasn't a lot of pointed, harsh lines towards your enemy. Maybe it was a wording thing, but it felt off. Vote -- Habitat ... that forgiveness line was the knockout punch in this one for me __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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