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05-27-2013, 02:10 PM
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No offence to camp cus I genuinely enjoyed the verse was pretty decent proba worth expanding on it an dropping it in the open mic. As for a s an f however I dont think
It panned out well. The rhyme scheme wasn't overly creative an was seriously lacking in swagger. As for zenlands his drop was a pretty bog standard rhyme scheme basic In parts but flowed well and there was a nice show of swagger especially as it progressed. Overall vote goes to zen but enjoyed the read from Both
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