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02-11-2018, 04:39 AM
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Scream
Join Date: Jun 2015
Posts: 3,251
Battle Record: 63-35
Accomplishments - 50 Wins
Champed - BA Picture Roast
- Battle Royale Tournament
- NBL Pic Roast
- Netcees Battle League
- NBL Season 11
- HoT Roast
- BAL Roast
- Tag Team Tourney
- NBL Barcotic Cypher
- SOL Pic Roast
- BA Tag
- XXXtentacion Roast
- 1-2 LR Champ
Rep Power: 22535868   |
Joe -- Soul Glow, Malcolm Butler
Had some clunky wording issues, but these stood out to me. Facts -- Like it's been said....your concepts are ok, the way u put em together is ehh like the 'average joe' and 'sloppy joe' could be good but fell flat. U just need more exp. Vote -JB |
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