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Tay roc
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Lol
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thats solved then
in all honesty this is why I dont like/use/quote wordplay. easiest thing to bite, varies too much across accents, n never generates enuff sting |
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my dude FB aint bitin..
ive seen the concept before.. but its pretty commonly used.. more like filler. |
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You gonna sit there with a straight face (with the exception of ur mouth) and say that?
I actually found it twice, smack niggas biting each other too I guess. Also found a Friday flip with it, dump cans in front ur house like the kid from Friday Old too, so u played it good. Interesting enough I seen other familiar punches U’ll Have a thread for u in the am to enjoy ur donut and coffee with |
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Biters smh, ruining text.
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@Cred *yawn*
You better have something good and not just a bad with the word dump trucks in it I am just appalled that two of the forums most renowned biters would have the audacity to accuse me without anything to show for. Respect the mods, that’s all I’ll say. Ugh Last edited by For Battling; 02-07-2018 at 04:43 AM. |
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wow
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Shout out tay roc. I knw him fr. Should bring this to his atten.doubt he give a fuck bout it tho. Lol
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fuck anybody who says they don't like wordplay. youd rather just all the same type of punches? from now on im only quoting bars with wordplay because I don't like phrase and idiom based punches.... @For Battling just a heads up
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the issue is you guys are overusing it....and mostly doing it poorly
blue bayou used wordplay and was awesome at it and he got heavily praised for it more recently fagot...er allen knight has also carved out a niche for himself as the wordplay guy.... currently you guys are ALL trying to be the wordplay guy and every other line is a wordplay that typically doesn't work both ways....is an obscure word or reference point or just simply doesn't work phonetically and that's a problem..... we aren't inherently against wordplay but this current wave of BAD wordplay is putting a negative light on it. obviously? why simple shit seem so hard for u guys |
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The other problem is people saying they don't know what a word is. Well look it up! nothing wrong with expanding your vocabulary lol.
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right...you guys have sortve created this wordplay bias imho...especially broke coming over here with his voting antics lol....its like a line was drawn in the sand
as far as the latter portion of your comment I disagree....but I can see both sides to it.....personally I feel like if you cant get your point across coherently IMMEDIATELY upon first read than impact suffers first and foremost......if im reading the verse I want it to read smooth...quick....harsh...if I got to stop reading....google a word read the definition then come back to the verse read the bar again and piece together your attempt it just completely sucks any fluidity you may have had initially out of the verse and hurts the effectiveness of the punch......ALSO people barely want to vote at all....if they find themselves having to do EXTRA footwork just to get a vote in its even more discouraging as a writer its YOUR job to get your point across as coherent and succinctly as possible...youre an artist.....you cant paint a picture and then tell your audience its their fault they cant see the picture that you intended to paint....... |
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I can kinda see what ur saying about looking up definitions. But I am painting a picture properly its kinda out of my control if people don't know the word. I've looked up words before and then re read the bar and been like "damn thats fire" so i guess I'm different than some people.
i was also kidding about not liking idiom / phrase based punches lol i think when done right they're dope.
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Lmao well look it up. Nigga fuck you, adjust your wording and execution so we don’t have to waste our time putting your shit together.
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