Killing Spree vs Maximus - MAXIMUS WINS

Orc · 01-15-2018, 02:13 PM

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

Kill Spree · 01-15-2018, 04:46 PM

Going 12

Kill Spree · 01-19-2018, 01:05 AM

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Or ext

Maximus · 01-19-2018, 05:58 AM

hey sorry I didn't check in.. will drop 10 tomorrow if you're cool with it @Killing Spree

Kill Spree · 01-19-2018, 08:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maximus

hey sorry I didn't check in.. will drop 10 tomorrow if you're cool with it @Killing Spree

Ya

Kill Spree · 01-19-2018, 10:21 PM

Yo at max I have no time to write a verse. So the 1-10 is what you get

For Battling · 01-19-2018, 10:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killing Spree

Yo at max I have no time to write a verse. So the 1-10 is what you get

Are you denying his ext after you already ok’ed it?
@BROKE LESNAR I’m letting you handle this one

Kill Spree · 01-19-2018, 10:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by For Battling

Are you denying his ext after you already ok’ed it?
@BROKE LESNAR I’m letting you handle this one

Didn’t say that... I am telling him I won’t have any time to write so he can post something and get an easy win if he shows.

I just don’t want the no show boot

Maximus · 01-20-2018, 12:46 AM

five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories @Killing Spree

Schadenfreude · 01-20-2018, 01:26 AM

KS would've loss anyway, garbage ass..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Maximus

five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
Wording ruined the concept
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
Light af
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
Too predictable
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
Played concept
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories
I thought bitches put 'em in their asses? Just OK

Work on harsher, much more personal punches, avoid name plays & used more relatable or popular references.

For Battling · 01-20-2018, 01:28 AM

@Killing Spree you’ll be in for next week but you gotta actually drop bro

five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
decent
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
this was cool
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
damn this was fire
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
lol light
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories
ok mr multi. Good s&f style bar

Overall pretty good verse bro, wardrobe malfunction was flames.

King Karaoke · 01-20-2018, 09:02 AM

Hi...

you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
i like this. Thought it was creative.
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
This was nice too.
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
This was dope.

I dont recall any of Killing Spree's verses but this probably wouldve been a good battle. That closer wasnt good tho. I like your wording. I read your stuff all the time. I dont think you need harshness. I think you need consistency. Dont just throw any line out there to make the line limit.

Bye...

Pinot Grij · 01-20-2018, 09:41 AM

Patient Zero got a slight smirk
Nobody could flip a 'strap' line and get a reaction these days
Euthanasia is amusing
And yea, I think someone else said it, but I think suppositories go in your butt, haha

Cool-ish verse. Opener was a little off.

Kill Spree · 01-20-2018, 08:49 PM

five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation
you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation
this was light
you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero
you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero
this was cool
shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes
like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed
I Fuck with this
gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania
you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia
meh.. basic
and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies
with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories @Killing Spree
Nah this was light

TBH I told you to save your bars I gave you the win. I should have just posted late cos this verse was light. and i gave U the Ext but oh well. props for showing

01-15-2018, 02:13 PM	#1
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Killing Spree vs Maximus - MAXIMUS WINS Rules Due Dates: Verses are due Thursday Jan 4th and will be open until Sunday. Battles that lack votes may close later. One sided battles may get closed early. Extensions are 24 hours Line Limit: Minimum of 8, maximum of 16 If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first. Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!

01-20-2018, 09:02 AM	#12
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353697	Hi... you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero i like this. Thought it was creative. shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed This was nice too. gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia This was dope. I dont recall any of Killing Spree's verses but this probably wouldve been a good battle. That closer wasnt good tho. I like your wording. I read your stuff all the time. I dont think you need harshness. I think you need consistency. Dont just throw any line out there to make the line limit. Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

01-20-2018, 09:41 AM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Patient Zero got a slight smirk Nobody could flip a 'strap' line and get a reaction these days Euthanasia is amusing And yea, I think someone else said it, but I think suppositories go in your butt, haha Cool-ish verse. Opener was a little off. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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01-15-2018, 04:46 PM	#2
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Going 12

01-19-2018, 01:05 AM	#3
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 Or ext

01-19-2018, 05:58 AM	#4
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	hey sorry I didn't check in.. will drop 10 tomorrow if you're cool with it @Killing Spree

01-19-2018, 10:21 PM	#6
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Yo at max I have no time to write a verse. So the 1-10 is what you get

01-20-2018, 12:46 AM	#9
Maximus Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 923 Battle Record: 25-26 Champed - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11169472	five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories @Killing Spree

01-20-2018, 01:28 AM	#11
For Battling Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2017 Posts: 3,986 Battle Record: 11-6 Rep Power: 5633916	@Killing Spree you’ll be in for next week but you gotta actually drop bro five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation decent you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero this was cool shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed damn this was fire gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia lol light and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories ok mr multi. Good s&f style bar Overall pretty good verse bro, wardrobe malfunction was flames.

01-20-2018, 08:49 PM	#14
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	five mics??? your rating is low bro, so seek help in desperation you're wack!.. on any competence scale, Killing is One Tenth like decimation this was light you hope your life ends cos you're a waste of space, far from a brazen hero you're just a nobody awaiting death, you give a new meaning to Patient Zero this was cool shots from my cannon will take out your sternum, I really bring death to foes like hoes wardrobe malfunction, Straps will go off to leave your chest exposed I Fuck with this gangsta??, hardcore?? nah, you're not a brute in mania you're really soft, this Killing is so mild it reminds us of euthanasia meh.. basic and yeah there's more shooting, you're gonna get fucked like twats in orgies with glocks and forties, I'll leave this pussy plugged like suppositories @Killing Spree Nah this was light TBH I told you to save your bars I gave you the win. I should have just posted late cos this verse was light. and i gave U the Ext but oh well. props for showing