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Old 12-30-2017, 08:29 PM   #8
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I read this expecting Pent to come through & drop some crazy ass verse.
Ive been watching you for some time Sym & you continue to pen some dope work.
the idea you brought to the table, though not original was very well thought out
the way the start of each section is a variation of hobble walk/cobble top is interesting.
one would think just adding together as their own little cryptic section would work.
but you make one look back to see the various ideas that you weave together...
and to be honest it works, I can look at this and feel like you have a few more tricks up your sleeve.
something to look forward to the rest of the season. I would say more about this but Im bored....so perhaps Ill go write & maybe come back to stroke your ego some more
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