Edgar AlPo vs Rawn MacDon (S&F) - RAWN WINS 7-5

[Flow]

who's as dope as I?, I'm a blind amputee that could chokeslam a mime

Lol liked that...

Anyways I digress


Rawn your piece flowed better but was lacking in the swag I was looking for. But even your rhyme scheme and multis could of been better but your lines were too short to really build on that...There was some lovely flow though and vocab so in that respect you blew this out the water.

Chyeeh - your piece had a lot more concepts and swagger but the flow was in a few places off but you did have some memorable lines an a in places a more complex scheme...the line I quoted above and also the catching hook t pain line were memorable...you did have some wording issues in places though.

Overall its a close one - think this will be a match up based on personal preference, an I really hope the votes are fair and its a tight match because the guy I aint voting for deserves some loving.....however on enjoyment I have to go....

Vote Chyeeeh