YDK vs Diablo - Diablo wins

Pinot Grij · 10-06-2017, 12:35 PM

YDK's verse was a cool read -- you gave some life to a pretty well-worn topic.. the line about "rap labels adoring me" was cool.. I really appreciate those personal touches much more these days. I thought it was well-written. Only critique is that the topic is simplistic.

Lars really killed this topic -- it was funny and original. Thoroughly entertained throughout. I tip this match to Lars based mainly on creativity and then execution.

Vote -- Lars

10-06-2017, 12:35 PM	#6
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	YDK's verse was a cool read -- you gave some life to a pretty well-worn topic.. the line about "rap labels adoring me" was cool.. I really appreciate those personal touches much more these days. I thought it was well-written. Only critique is that the topic is simplistic. Lars really killed this topic -- it was funny and original. Thoroughly entertained throughout. I tip this match to Lars based mainly on creativity and then execution. Vote -- Lars __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

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