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05-22-2013, 01:50 PM
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Arm the Homeless
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That's pretty crazy having all the lines with one letter at a time. Nice try man. The rhymes themselves were pretty weak but for the effort that something like this takes it deserves props. Check out Alpha Beta by zygote in the HOF thread for a similar piece to this done perfectly. Keep droppin and drop feed on other OM pieces man.
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