Aye yall check out this wack ass shit lol

Strikta · 07-14-2017, 08:54 AM

U fuckin wack ass nigga.. u talk alotta mess for being a shitty writer.

Dog I roll w/ crazy muslims that would get ya for skin color
V is a character, a social wanna be, typa faggot you see on Big Brother
Take you to school, stick you like Elmer, write off V like a 60 degree angle
Winning? I see fable, Ali the rubber, one bounce back,n you wont be stable
I'm back on my shit no need for a motivator, I know you thought it was see ya later.
V looks of a freebaser, I'm the neighborhood vending machine, he just feed the paper.
Come see me in real life, you'll get stage fright
Just like your real life this V goes no where, like a fat nerd's on prom night
The mission is get money bro n you ain't doing it with them videos dude
Matter fact get a video of your wifey performing, she live on this didgeridoo
She brought me to your cabin in the woods dog down to her sex lair
Straving for this shit dog,said V only goes up when it's drumsticks in the air
just listen the AK I own will go off and steams heavily
Ill come out them trees carefully...his next podcast is The Aftermath Ep.7:Please Pray for Me

Fuck off the site w/ that trash^.. get u some practice then come back sandy.

Not one bar was good. Not a one.

Why is V feeding paper? & what is a didgeridoo?

U wack as fuck ass boi. Lol

Kill Spree · 07-14-2017, 09:05 AM

What is this?

Strikta · 07-14-2017, 09:08 AM

Some mf shit is what it is.

Dope girl · 07-14-2017, 09:11 AM

He talk a lot of crap
think he can rap but lame

Kill Spree · 07-14-2017, 09:20 AM

Who is it

Strikta · 07-14-2017, 09:21 AM

All Ass

Zaddy · 07-14-2017, 09:53 AM

No wonder why you never show

Strikta · 07-14-2017, 11:15 AM

Lol that's accurate actually.

TeckNeek · 07-14-2017, 11:32 AM

if you think thats wack wait till you read my verse for the Pic Tournament roflmao..

Geno · 07-14-2017, 11:54 AM

I mean. The style of it feels right. But none od the words are working.

Some peopke just aint meant to 9write battle bars. Ive never been much of a battle bar writer. I can identify dope lines and judge battles with the beat of them.. But could neber put a really "dope" verse together. This just isnt good lyrically. Smh

Strikta · 07-14-2017, 03:42 PM

This shit is downright fucking wack.

Dope girl · 07-14-2017, 04:55 PM

SMH @ this thread
Picking on nobs everyone has taste different in raps

07-14-2017, 07:11 PM

Haha you would do something like this.

Have fun with all your dickryders in here @Bags

And thanks for getting me some more hits, lol haters are your best advertisement, keep it coming you fucking no life having ass junky.

07-14-2017, 08:54 AM	#1
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	Aye yall check out this wack ass shit lol U fuckin wack ass nigga.. u talk alotta mess for being a shitty writer. Dog I roll w/ crazy muslims that would get ya for skin color V is a character, a social wanna be, typa faggot you see on Big Brother Take you to school, stick you like Elmer, write off V like a 60 degree angle Winning? I see fable, Ali the rubber, one bounce back,n you wont be stable I'm back on my shit no need for a motivator, I know you thought it was see ya later. V looks of a freebaser, I'm the neighborhood vending machine, he just feed the paper. Come see me in real life, you'll get stage fright Just like your real life this V goes no where, like a fat nerd's on prom night The mission is get money bro n you ain't doing it with them videos dude Matter fact get a video of your wifey performing, she live on this didgeridoo She brought me to your cabin in the woods dog down to her sex lair Straving for this shit dog,said V only goes up when it's drumsticks in the air just listen the AK I own will go off and steams heavily Ill come out them trees carefully...his next podcast is The Aftermath Ep.7:Please Pray for Me Fuck off the site w/ that trash^.. get u some practice then come back sandy. Not one bar was good. Not a one. Why is V feeding paper? & what is a didgeridoo? U wack as fuck ass boi. Lol

07-14-2017, 11:32 AM	#9
TeckNeek LyricalWar Veteran Join Date: Jul 2016 Location: BayArea, California Posts: 201 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 310306	if you think thats wack wait till you read my verse for the Pic Tournament roflmao.. __________________ LyricalWar • UrbanProwlers • 411hype Digitalhiphop • RipTheMic • RapMusic TheSyndacate [http://benblazyn.wix.com/beats]

07-14-2017, 11:54 AM	#10
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	I mean. The style of it feels right. But none od the words are working. Some peopke just aint meant to 9write battle bars. Ive never been much of a battle bar writer. I can identify dope lines and judge battles with the beat of them.. But could neber put a really "dope" verse together. This just isnt good lyrically. Smh __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

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07-14-2017, 09:05 AM	#2
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	What is this?

07-14-2017, 09:08 AM	#3
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	Some mf shit is what it is.

07-14-2017, 09:11 AM	#4
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	He talk a lot of crap think he can rap but lame

07-14-2017, 09:20 AM	#5
Kill Spree Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 4,460 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 37645698	Who is it

07-14-2017, 09:21 AM	#6
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	All Ass

07-14-2017, 09:53 AM	#7
Zaddy ZAAAAM Join Date: Jun 2016 Posts: 1,623 Battle Record: 6-10 Champed - What's That?! A Cypher! Rep Power: 9877045	No wonder why you never show

07-14-2017, 11:15 AM	#8
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	Lol that's accurate actually.

07-14-2017, 03:42 PM	#11
Strikta 39 NS, lost in votes once Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 11,242 Battle Record: 32-40 Champed - Time to Kill X - Write Week III Rep Power: 84181452	This shit is downright fucking wack.

07-14-2017, 04:55 PM	#12
Dope girl Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: I live in Florida Posts: 4,788 Battle Record: 3-8 Rep Power: 55521419	SMH @ this thread Picking on nobs everyone has taste different in raps

07-14-2017, 07:11 PM	#13
Warthog Lite Guest Posts: n/a	Haha you would do something like this. Have fun with all your dickryders in here @Bags And thanks for getting me some more hits, lol haters are your best advertisement, keep it coming you fucking no life having ass junky.